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BARBiE

im surronded in a group.

a group of people

there make up caked on

to cover up the zits that they

wouldnt dare reaveal.

 

a group of people with

there legs freshly shaved and lotion

on to make them smooth and shiny.

 

a group of people that proabbly no the latest gossip about everyone made up or not who knows they

may have made it up themselves

 

these girls are size zero and

there evil they walk togther and slowy

suck you into there curse

 

you soon start judging people and

stop eating so you can be skinny

and maybe you even die your hair

 

you forget the person you ARE

and become the person

the world will love.

 

 

so has i am surronded by this curse i stop

and think its okay to be insane but not as insane as them

 

i also think how can i please them but

be that person that everyone loves.

 

ha i bet they all think that but how will i get out of this curse

 

this barbie curse the person that

everyone hates

 

bewarded unlike i was it easy to get

stuck.!

Reviews

[Fallen Angel]

Corbin this rocks my sox all the way to Texas and back! This is so good you are like the best writer in the wholw world. I think that this poem is so true. I love how you write the truth and don't care what people think about it. You be you and don't ever change. Never ever for no one. You are like so totally awesome. I love you girl just like a sister.

[That Weirdo You Just Mi..]

Corbin this rocks my socks all the way off! This is soo good and sooo true! Ugh I can't believe how good of a writer you are. I bet you don't even know it. It sorta sounds like you need an Ainsley hug though. Do you? lol. Well I will see you at school. Luvs you girly. LeeLee

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

awwww corbin!!! see, you have changed!!! I can see the corbin coming back in you, and it's pleasant, refreshing, inspiring!!! I hope you get out of this barbie infection, but right now, i must say I liked this poem. I am not going to name who i think it is about...but..yeahh... anyways, this was a good description of the evil, and what to stay away from!!!! I do miss the old corbin, but i'm thinking she's right around the corner. Keep it up!