wishes+washes

yeah.

01.
luca watches blank walls
and presses hands to ears
but that won't stop the voices

[skin is not soundproof]
.

02.
luca wishes many wishes
many more than stars in the sky
and even more than the stars
that left her eyes

[some idiot forgot she needed them]
.

03.
luca dances in the shower
hoping to fall and break something 
major in the hope she'll finally 
end up in hospital for good

[in hospitals your not invisible yet]
.

04.
luca sits out in thunderstorms and 
waits for the eye to pass overhead
so she can finnaly feel peace and
smell the new rain

[and see how well her tears were hidden]
.

05.
luca wishes she was made of sugar
then with every shower or thunderstorm
or even every wash a little more of her

self would wash down the skinkhole
and never reemerge

[luca thinks shes better of in drains or puddles]

she is someone to the world.
and to no one is she the world.

[i think she has a point]
.

Author's Note

ignore grammar, its how i want it to look.

Reviews

[deeps]

"ignore grammar, its how i want it to look."

Then that is all that matters. I found this interesting.
I like this write alot. I like the realness feel to it.