wishes+washes

wishes+washes

A Poem by burning paper planes
"

yeah.

"
01.
luca watches blank walls
and presses hands to ears
but that won't stop the voices

[skin is not soundproof]
.

02.
luca wishes many wishes
many more than stars in the sky
and even more than the stars
that left her eyes

[some idiot forgot she needed them]
.

03.
luca dances in the shower
hoping to fall and break something 
major in the hope she'll finally 
end up in hospital for good

[in hospitals your not invisible yet]
.

04.
luca sits out in thunderstorms and 
waits for the eye to pass overhead
so she can finnaly feel peace and
smell the new rain

[and see how well her tears were hidden]
.

05.
luca wishes she was made of sugar
then with every shower or thunderstorm
or even every wash a little more of her
self would wash down the skinkhole
and never reemerge

[luca thinks shes better of in drains or puddles]

she is someone to the world.
and to no one is she the world.

[i think she has a point]
.

© 2010 burning paper planes


Author's Note

burning paper planes
ignore grammar, its how i want it to look.

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"ignore grammar, its how i want it to look."

Then that is all that matters. I found this interesting.
I like this write alot. I like the realness feel to it.


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burning paper planes

Preston, Lancs, United Kingdom



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i've been told my words are beautiful i've been told that they make people cry therefore id like you to read something and give a second to tell me why thankyou more..

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