Another's

What’s more special

Than another’s hand in yours?

What’s more self-satisfying

Than holding on to the one you love?

What’s more sound

Than the added warmth radiated

Throughout your body from another’s?

 

It is a comfort

That compares to nothing else.

It is a feeling

That none can exceed.

It is a butterfly

Fluttering throughout

Your entire body.

 

You look down,

And it is grip of faith.

You look down,

And it is a genuine love.

You look down,

And you see a lock

That no key can open.

 

This lock can represent

An everlasting friendship,

Unified beating hearts

That no murmur can separate,

Or a longing comfort.

We all need another’s to seem whole.

Hands were meant to be held. 

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Very nice, emotive, descriptive, good imagery. Many people can relate to this kind of poem.

[GunMetal]

I really enjoyed this. It was pleasant, and pretty. I especially liked the last stanza. Great work.

[Tate Morgan]

A beautiful thought

[A.Lee]

I like that this doesnt necessarily have to pertain to lovers. It could also be a best friend or a parent as well. I really enjoyed the 2nd and 3rd stanza, they really solidified this piece.

[JenLyn]

This really didn't appeal to me but that's just my opinion but I did enjoy the lines It is a feeling

That none can exceed.

It is a butterfly

Fluttering throughout

Your entire body.

Those words and the imagery are awesome in my opinion.