Obsessed

Obsessed

A Poem by C.J.G.
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Just another boy...

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I’m obsessed.

I simply cannot help myself.

He’s a disease that has infected my mind

He runs through my veins

And pumps his deadly stare through my body

Until it punctures my heart

 

I’m obsessed.

And it’s helplessly unavoidable.

I dream about those eyes never escaping mine

How I wish they never did.

It felt as if we were watching each other forever

Just staring into the abyss’ of each other’s souls.

I dream about his soft lips christening my cheeks

Slowly creeping towards my lips

So delicate, yet so passionate

I can still feel the electricity.

 

If only they knew. 

© 2010 C.J.G.


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Freaking LOVE this! So strong and deliberate. Your words evoke the emotion you feel inside. This is what makes great writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


"I dream about those eyes never escaping mine"

That line was very powerful to me. Like seriously, shivers. You are an excellent writer, and this poem was superb, especially that line...wow. :) Keep writing! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is well put. Everyone has fantasies about the one they care about; even if the person doesn’t feel the same. Nice write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Excellent example of obsession. Fabulous job

Posted 14 Years Ago



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