magic

sappy, I know

I used to love it when you said that our love was like magic,

Not in the sense of it being entertaining and fun but,

Something that was unexplainable, something that blew your mind,

And you were right ,

because magic involves tricks,

And tricks are deceiving.

So what was our love really?

Was it just some act? A performance?

Were you trying to seize me or the crowd?

But I must admit you were a damn good magician,

Your best trick was on me,

You stole my heart and disappeared,

And I have no explanation

My mind is blown

Just like magic

 

 

Reviews

[Shirlena]

Hi chelsea,

I'm hit with this poems ability of expression and the vividness with which the "victim" feels loss and betrayal. Evocative piece.

[Sami Khalil]

Magical write...:)......................

[Bibhuti Bhusan Rath]

nice one and well written

[Addy]

That's really amazing and such a good comparison. Good job.

[chelsea jackson]

thank you!