Observed

just a poem...

eyes.

eyes on me and

I cannot control the reaction.

the knee-jerk because

 

he is watching me.

 

and he traps me there,

cornered in like a snarl

by a brush,

a bug in the lamp light

 

twitching.

 

 

Reviews

[Steffi]

I love the choppy style it adds so much tension and feeling behind the piece and really propels it forward.

Great Write

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

holy s**t.... wow this is a great little poem. may i ask what the inspiration is? it is direct and too the point and leaves you lingering and wanting more but satisfied with what it is. well done.

once again nothing to do with the contest... so i will tell you what i will do because i really like your writting look for a contest called "Show Me" and resubmit you won't regret it....

[Sparrow]

Yes, been there, still there sometimes. I adore the haltingness of it.