The Writer

The Writer

A Poem by Not Afraid of Bruises
"

just a bit of honesty

"

 

 

blank.

 

she fills you with

chitter and chatter

and the reasons to breathe

 

and she selfishly hopes that her stories

seem kinder, taste sweeter and

draw more flies than

the words others write,

so that she might live the dream.

© 2008 Not Afraid of Bruises


Author's Note

Not Afraid of Bruises
the basics - brutality welcome :)

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"and she selfishly hopes that her stories
seem kinder, taste sweeter and
draw more flies than"

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thought this is very true! You have made a statment most elegantly. I loved the structure and the flow. This is very good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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