acceptance

its a peom/story doesnt ryhme

There was a time I thought that i was unbreakable,

A time I thought nothing could hurt me

or penatrate the shield i kept to protect myself.

But now i feel broken,

the pain and anguish that i carry is becoming heavier and heavier

I feel to young to feel this burden, but my age does not matter to the demons that are attacking me

I feel scared and alone engulfed by anger and rage and lonliness.

but on this cold winters night the pain is startin to subdue

as i close my eyes and the world around me begins to swim

the things in life that my friends and i think are so important are nothing anymore

Vast colours stream through my mind im fading fast and i must come to accept what is happening to me.

I must come to accept that i am leaving this world behind

Author's Note

sorry for any spelling mistakes. this story is based on a fictional character that ye will see in future stories named elena smith she does NOT exist, she is a character that i have made up

Reviews

[sts.]

I'd love to learn more about this character. The emotions are full of brutal reality. Nice write.

[Christina Woods]

I remember you reading the first draft of this over the phone to me and laughing at every sentence because you thought that you were no good. I think the amazing reviews say different! xx

[Distant horizons]

wow Caitlin. powerful write. stunning.

[Wolfwind]

I am now curious as to how this character has come to speak these words. What led up to this life change and where it will lead. Like a trailer to a movie, your ink teases the inner mind. =)

Aaron