Your Eyes

As I awake, I stare into your eyes
honest and understanding, telling no lies
smelling the sweet scent of your skin
as my feelings grow strong, I hold them within
I can feel the passion as we embrace
the look of satisfaction on your face
as I look into your eyes, with every glance
we started something beautiful, a living romance
I hold you close and feel your heart beat
whispering softly as you fall asleep
we build a relationship, honest and true
and all I know is you love me, and I love you
but as time goes on we grow apart
something seems wrong, I feel it in my heart
I try to communicate but you don't care
I'm surrounded by deceit I feel it in the air
as the truth comes out the sky begins to darken
my heart bleeds, but I can't stop the blood from falling
you tell me you never cheated and want me to believe
but shame, shame on you for trying to deceive
you lied to me with every breath you took
it was my heart you stole without a second look
I sit home waiting for you to come through the door
to tell you what you did to me you filthy w***e
I sit here wishing that you would die....
all because your eyes told a lie

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

yes its so sweet ,i can see your love dripping on page i can feel the hurt in your voice yes to cheat is not a lovely thing after the promises she made with the passion she showed and loyalty in eyes wide with love only to leave after, i see soreness in your voice ,love is so special you dont for get easy and cheating too you hate and never forget,that wasa nice write full with love ending in cheat hatred and remorse ,i loved it all

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

*it's like a relationship gone wrong written out on a piece of paper.* I like this because it does something different then the usual poem. The usual poem about lies and deciet doesnt begin talking about how good it was in a relationship, at least not how you started it. It flowed nicely from begining to end, and flipped from good to bad nicely. I'm with Lady Poet i like the fact that it was nice and sweet in the begining and then at the end turns ugly. Love this.

Danni J

[Ms. Ella M]

A wonderfully written poem, I can ony imagine it comes straight the heart of experience. Only when one has felt heartache, pain or any raw emotion does it come through like this- Great Write! Keep up the healing...

[D. Nelson]

This is very good, very emotional. i enjoyed the way it went from a romantic poem to the sad reality of failing relationships in an instant. this poem is well written and tugs at the heart strings, great write.

[Veralily]

Wow, deep. Great writing style. I could feel the emotion in your words. Definitely keep up the great work!

[Caramel Gold]

Ok the reason I love this poem is because it starts out nice and sweet then turns ugly at the end LoL

my heart bleeds, but I can't stop the blood from falling...
...my favorite line, I think that is a creative way of describing a broken heart