Loss

Loss

A Poem by nevershoutnever.
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I'm so confused...

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I die on sight
a little more each day,
without a fight.
Never really get a say.
I thought I was fine.
I'm losing my mind.
I'm done playing the game.
I've been missing inside.
Still going insane,
you're not by my side.
I have thought about death
and how I took the right road
when I should've gone left.
When all else failed,
I ran to you.
My so called friends always bailed,
but there you were
staying true.
I still love you,
and that's no lie.
I do have prof,
my alibi.
I need you more than 
you would care to know.
Why?
Why?
Why?

© 2011 nevershoutnever.


Author's Note

nevershoutnever.
I love him, but that was low. UGH

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@Junger- I agree 100.
@StrawberryHart36- iKR!
@It Broke Me- Thanks!
@DespondentDreamer- Thanks, I try ;)
@Talkativeted- Thank you!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great poem, well written and full of meaning.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great expressive write... definitely feelings that can be related to..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the emotion. The words really come alive =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It WAS low. Just blow him off, he'll figure it out.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well Love comes in different forms, as well that you seem to have a deep heart as well as that you try to find the guy who wouldn´t hurt you is that right¿¿

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 11, 2011
Last Updated on July 11, 2011
Tags: suicide, pain, confusion, love, hate

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nevershoutnever.
nevershoutnever.

Royal Oak, MI



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I started to write a big paragraph about my life, but who would read it? Emma: thirteen; unable to make decisions; curious; fidgety; OCD - maybe; loving; too caring; kind-heart; humorous; bubbly; t.. more..

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