Thanks

The pines in the woods

The needles that stay true green

The trunks brown and wide

 

The gentle morning

The birds song that wakes the world

The sunrise shines bright

 

The breeze on my face

The wind that pushes the clouds

The air that I breathe

 

The calm blue ocean

The waves that lap the seashore

The water that shines

 

The colours, so bright

The hues that bring life to us

The shades that we see

 

Yes, I am thankful

For these wonders in my life

So should you, give thanks

Reviews

[Jessica]

GD!


P.S.
This is very similar to the story, The Witch and her Hopping Pot, from 'The Tales of Beedle the Bard' by JK Rowling.

(You said)



I couldn't think of any thing to write,so....................It's still better than nothing..................

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the Thank-You haiku contest!

[Ingy]

This is really beautiful! The scenery is so vivid, I could almost smell the pine trees and feel the cool mist of the ocean air! I really enjoyed this. You are very gifted. Thanks for sharing! :-)

[Butterflymom]

This is so very well done, and the imagery is awesome! Great job on the Haiku string. Aren't they just too fun to write?