Just you and me

A poem i wrote about an amazing guy... and this is how it went lol

Just you and me

Looking through the photographs

thinking of our dreams

basking in the memories

of the times just you and me

 

the times your arms were locked in mine

the times i felt you breathe

when all the world just vanished

the times just you and me

 

the times your lips would touch me gently

the times id fill with glee

your heart beating softly

the times just you and me

Reviews

[M. Amphet Salt]

I liked this piece. It shows thought. I feel however it does need grammer, mechanics work. the id, = I'd and commas before you and me. Those are just a few.

[Jolly Jake]

I really like this one too, and I understand how you feel. I hope writing this has helped you escape it a little, i know when i'm down writing always helps me feel better. Nice ink!

[APoetsMuse]

i really like this one

[Ama May Cooper]

hmmm....because we had broken up lol..

[unspokenguilt]

Hmm, why wouldn't he take it so well?
It's sweet and lovely...It's what you feel!
Great write and Best wishes!
:) ear