Sucks to have a heart

Just somethign very short i wrote after being somewhat reminded of an old wound, adding insult to my romantic injurys

Sucks to have heart.. 

to fall head over heels and cut your knee's

.. atleast i stopped myself before I  plunged into the pool and drowned 

Sucks to have a heart.. to feel like.. to feel love.. to fall apart..

Reviews

[Orlando Murcia]

It does suck

But it is a blessing at the same time

Great work

[Alex Zynder]

i like the ending, it was very strong. I d like to see even more of the body though, i think you re missing an opportunity to say more!

[Soul Magic✯]

very well expressed. the sun always comes out after the rain... keep your head up. this would make you strong and wise

[Crazy Cat Man]

Oh yes.....:( i know how u feel...... great piece.