Pit

accepting oneself

I'm trapped and i can't get out.
It's DARK and COLD.
I'm surrounded by my faults,
just waiting for me to behold.

I'm afraid and I'm stumbling.
There's no way out.
I'm being watched closely
and my heart is filled with doubt.

Wait there's a light.
Who could it be?
OH MY GOD
it's my friends come to save me.

With the rope in hand
I start to ascend.
Step by step.
I'm happy, I can't pretend.

THANKS FRIENDS! 

Reviews

[122009]

I'm afraid and I'm stumbling.
There's no way out.
I'm being watched closely
and my heart is filled with doubt.

I really really like this. This stanza particularly. It all flows nicely together, and I like the contrasting emotions from beginning to end.