growth

glimpses of what I am
and what I could be
evolving changing
mutating growing
I will be bigger than this
I am already more
is this what a stifled
plant feels like?
"I know I will be a redwood one day
but maybe not
if I don't get past
this little pot"

Reviews

[deadlife]

Confined to the little space given.. life is choking..Smothering to death...I can be big..i can grow..glimpse of my dreams and realities..Unwanted..i wish to grow..i love to grow..
Very well written..it feels like it's smouldering..slowly. Don't let it die like this..give it air..flames..burn the world..Melt the pot..Grow!
A beautiful though melancholic write filled with a subtle feeling of dormant anger..very nice.
Let there be fire.
-rupam