Rebellion

The Prayer change to an insurrectionist

He won't Believe to God anymore

He never trust to faith again

What he see, touch, feel now that he believe

 

Heaven just another side world people dream of

Hell is the fact we all facing here

Bible only a monthly book review

it's not important than newspaper

 

Born as a priest child

Grew up as a missionaries

Everything has own perspective view

Now on he have an angle view of world

Since every single thing he have has lost

 

Evil is not evil forever

Sometimes human need it

And sometimes Angel use it

Even for the world kindness

 

Reviews

[Chaos]

I love the message. I think anytime you step outside of societal norms, you run the risk of being an outcast for standing on your own beliefs. Is it really rebellion. In society, anytime you step outside of the norm it's rebellion. I think the message here is good, but there is something wrong with the grammer. I think you omitting words or something. Overall good write.