A Poem by ★ Aeryn Harmonica Truckfinn ★

Just a poem I wrote last year for English... Not much, but I wanted to put something up.... Analyze it how you will...


I’m lost,
Blinded in the dark,
Trying to find the light to show me the way,
All Alone.

The whole world is around me,
And yet,
Nobody knows I’m here.
I’m invisible.

I’m Confused,
Unable to tell up from down,
Left from right.
Am I going forward to the future,
Or back to where I began?

I’m Afraid,
Not knowing,
If I can keep going.
Will this be the end?
Will I ever see you again?

I’m lost,
In this sea of people.
I can’t get up for air,
So I’m falling, falling,
Away into nothingness.

Everyone is here with me,
But I am still,
All Alone.

© 2010 ★ Aeryn Harmonica Truckfinn ★

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★ Aeryn Harmonica Truckfinn ★
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we're all lost in in these crazy world...
finding our way to near perfection.
nice one! loved it!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Love it! Straight from the heart, as it should be. We all truly are lost. Wonderful!

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it as it is. Started with strong lines. Brought the reader in with good questions. Described being lost and trying to have purpose. Ending left us with the person still trying to figure their place in a life. A excellent poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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3 Reviews
Added on January 1, 2010
Last Updated on January 5, 2010
Tags: Lost, Confused, Confusion, Alone, Lonely


★ Aeryn Harmonica Truckfinn ★
★ Aeryn Harmonica Truckfinn ★

Smalltown, WI

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