Two Dreamers

Two Dreamers

There were two dreamers,

Who followed their hearts,

Straying from the worn paths,

Leading to different parts;

When the world told the rules,

They didn’t listen,

“I decide for me,”

As they set out on their mission;

By chance their paths crossed,

Both led by childlike dreams,

Their souls in tune,

Only they two know what it means.

Reviews

[ogirhsog]

Well, your poem doesn't seem to have any particular rhyme or rhythm. Consequently I'm not sure it could properly be considered a "poem" per se. I'm afraid it doesn't really make much sense either. I just can't tell from reading it, what it's actually supposed to be about. Perhaps you could expand it a bit more and add some more details, so as to make it more clear just what your poem is actually about?