Until We Win

Until We Win

A Poem by J Stylez


Freedom is taken

Justice is lost

A hero is chosen

With crimson cost

Life of oppression

The taint of sin

Yet we’ll survive

Until we win

Bodies are broken

And families torn

With every failure

Our spirit’s worn

A savage wound

That time can’t mend

But we must fight

Until we win

Our Savior’s come

The Hope of glory

Through twilight battles

Stir morning story

In darkest night

The day begins

We shall not rest

Until we win


© 2010 J Stylez

Author's Note

J Stylez
Something quick before work. Didn't put any thought into it, just typed what came to me.

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Wow, this is powerful. Especially the end, "In the darkest of night
The day begins
We shall not rest
Until we win"
It really gives an strong impact on the reader. I loved it.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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