Ol' Blue Eyes

More River Musings - "Who is he, say the youngsters)

I thought of you today,

Kingfisher passed me by.

So speedily he flew,

beneath a grieving sky.

That flash of vivid hue

which took me by surprise,

reminded me of you

and the blueness in your eyes.

I found myself in awe

and wished you'd sang for me,

of tender, truthful love,

beside this willow tree.

Reviews

[θεά]

A harmonious description of love, nature and tranquility. Aren't kingfishers one of the loveliest birds on this planet? Lurid, enticing and quick to fly off- much like certain moments of life.

The wistfulness of the concluding verses is well-expressed. Poetry with notes of longing add to its extant lyricism.

You're on a spree of great poetry. Keep it up!
Best,
M.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Mallika for your thoughtful and very encouraging review. Kingfishers are most beautiful birds. I don't see them often, but when I do it makes the moment special.

[Onlyme]

Tranquillity and beauty of nature and reminders of true love. Heartfelt and delightful to read and cherish. Thank you, Chris. This made my day. Truly lovely.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Dawn. Happy these words made your day:))

[Onlyme]

Chris you are a angel on earth. As everyday you spread joy in your delightful poems. And that truth. hugs Dawn.

[Chris Shaw]

Sweetheart you. Now you have made my day :))

[Onlyme]

Chris, that is what I like about you humble down to earth and kind. And more so a lovely lady. And it shows in your poetry. take care my friend Dawn.

[Chris Shaw]

And you too Dawn of the lovely name :))

[Onlyme]

Aw Chris. I be getting a big head. Never get in my home again. lol cheers. Chris. 💐

[Chris Shaw]

..............:)

[Arriam]

How very much I love Ol' Blue Eyes myself, and your kingfisher comparison was absolutely stunning. If anything could put my heart at ease, it is this. Kudos to you for being so very inspired and inspirational all at once.
Fondly,
Arriam

[Chris Shaw]

Such a kind response from you Arriam. I appreciate very much your visits to my page.

Chris

[Samuel Dickens]

Here in America, "Ol Blue eyes" is a common reference to Frank Sinatra. Whether he had anything to do with this lovely poem, I know not, but the blue of the Kingfisher is probably more magnificent. (And sings at least as well)

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Samuel. It is indeed a nod to Frank Sinatra, but also to the wondrous Kingfisher as well. You have two for the price of one with this poem. Lovely response from you. Hope your day is a good one.

Chris

[Dave Brown]

A designer rose in a field of pansies
beautifully done
I assume ol' blue eyes is ol' blue eyes
Dave

[Chris Shaw]

Ol' blue eyes is indeed the crooner himself. Great fan of Frank Sinatra and I still like watching those old movies on tv :))

[Jon Roggie]

The one I know used to live in Palm Springs. I met his mom, and have a decanter he gave my Dad.
I also get to watch the scrub jays. Beautiful birds, but they are very raucous!

Jon

[Chris Shaw]

Lucky you Jon. What a voice. Indeed this poem a nod to him. Thank you.

Chris

[Carolynn]

I love the use of a kingfisher in this one and of the melancholy feel of a love that took flight before it could begin.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Carolynn. Love that bird. Don't see them often enough.

Chris

[Jimmy Yetts]

In my country, "Ol' Blue Eyes" could only be Frank Sinatra--who did do a bit of singing.
Lovely, kinda dreamy poem, good poetess!

[Chris Shaw]

Of course Jimmy. This indeed is a nod to the one and only :)

Chris

[moog-drika]

it gives such a pleasant imagery. and the rhythm in it added a blue-like life to the piece. Loved it. :D

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you moog-drika, so pleased you enjoyed my lines.

Chris