Heaven

River Musings

lily lays her head
safely in embrace of leaves
floating on water

Reviews

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

I loved this haiku. Gave me such a sense of serenity!

[Chris Shaw]

Lovely to see you Ditzy. Thank you so much.

Chris

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Welcome my friend. :)

[John the Baptist]

This haiku leaves the impression of total support and freedom from fear and pain. Such indeed is Heaven.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thank yous John

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this needed so little to say so much...and create a snapshot in our minds...

yes, beauty...and made me hum a song while reading...Bryan Adams' "Heaven"---

[Chris Shaw]

Big fan of Bryan Adams, Jacob. Thank you my friend.

Chris

[AJNJ]

A water lily, so restful in her aquatic home. Floating in bliss. Awesome!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Pestonjee. Always appreciate your visits.

Chris

[Lorry]

Well, I don't wanna piss on your chips Chris, but that's just irresponsible parenting if you ask me. I'm sure everyone at wc will crowdfund her a crib 😀

[Chris Shaw]

Ha ha Lorry. Keep the happy coming. Thank you.

Chris

[Dave Brown]

And another beautiful offering
I can see the quiet waters under the overhanging shade, as a Lilly drifts on by

[Chris Shaw]

Thankyou Dave. They are indeed beautiful.

Chris

[Ted Kniffen]

Would there be little frogs dancing across those lily pads? 'tis a peaceful scene you have written here Chris ... and it comes at a good time. A little peace at this time is welcome.

Take care

[Chris Shaw]

No frogs Ted on that occasion. The lily was completely alone with the leaves. Many thanks.
read moreNo frogs Ted on that occasion. The lily was completely alone with the leaves. Many thanks.

Chris

[Ana Papaya]

So beautiful chris.
Can picture it.
Lovely haiku. It is a haiku right?

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Ana. A Haiku is what I was aiming for :)

[Ana Papaya]

:) and it's a lovely one