Trembles The Tree

Trembles The Tree

A Poem by Chris Shaw


shivers in autumn
cascading gold smothers green
barely a blade seen

© 2020 Chris Shaw


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God made a quilt out of leaves...and it is keeping the grass warm.

Nice one Chris...I just went outside to search for a blade....but we have so many trees here that the grass is totally covered...and the quilt goes snap, crackle, pop as I walk through it.
relate to this one, big time.
j.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

I was also in the garden. A sight to behold. A whole carpet of small gold leaves. It looked even bet.. read more
Wild Rose

3 Years Ago

A quilt to keep the grass warm?
Here the wind blows all the leaves into one place
At t.. read more



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The leaves fall in Autumn to be vigilant through the Winter and wake again as new buds with renewed energy... poetically speaking... Your haiku is penned with the splendor of cool
nights and sugar kisses stored in leaves 🍁 that produce the colors of red and gold and lavender.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Dear Pat. Sending you fond regards for a happy Wednesday. Thank you for your lovely review. Sugar ki.. read more
Another winter is upon us and we brace ourselves for the snuffing out of all that greenery around us. We have little option but to find joy in winter's white and silver. How helpless we are Ms.Chris....season after season...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you AJ, yes we prepare for another winter and beautiful it can be too, though I do prefer the .. read more
I can feel autumn's chill dear Chris. The relentless march of seasons. Smothering all things tender and verdant. Beautiful haiku!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Dear Ditzy fav cat, lovely to get a visit from you. Yes, the autumn mornings are feeling chilly and .. read more
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the treats dear Chris!

I saw the snow covering tree stumps and they looke.. read more
God made a quilt out of leaves...and it is keeping the grass warm.

Nice one Chris...I just went outside to search for a blade....but we have so many trees here that the grass is totally covered...and the quilt goes snap, crackle, pop as I walk through it.
relate to this one, big time.
j.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

I was also in the garden. A sight to behold. A whole carpet of small gold leaves. It looked even bet.. read more
Wild Rose

3 Years Ago

A quilt to keep the grass warm?
Here the wind blows all the leaves into one place
At t.. read more
And i love every leaf:) autumn rain is a symphony for this bunny:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you Bunny for calling on this little Haiku. Nature is a delight.

Chris
lovely sliver of autumn sigh


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

A little snap shot of my garden yesterday morning. Thank you iliOZ.

Chris
You've seen my garden covered in a carpet of leaves of all colours then! Indeed the grass is barely growing and the shedding continues apace. Sweep one day, looks the same the next. Nice haiku capturing the colour.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you John. Such a pretty time of year. The leaf fall in our garden looked spectacular yesterday.. read more

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Berkshire, United Kingdom



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