winter snow

the sparkling snow,

falling slowly from the sky,

it seems that they fall all together,

yet they're all didifferent,

to bad no one notices,

people are too naive,

to stop and look around,

seeing how like is one beautiful canvas,

the way snow piles on the trees,

almost christmas,

the way some of the pine trees stand,

tall and mighty,

while i'm weak and fragile,

like the sparkling snow,

falling from the sky.

Reviews

[Anonymous Girl]

I LOVE IT!!
A scenery turned into a poem??!!
Nice going!! ^^

[constancelovesdarkness]

thanks:)

[Anonymous Girl]

You are welcome ^^

[Castonovia]

Only misspelled different, but the rest is dazzling, sometimes we take the small things in life such as snow for granted not seeing the beauty nor oh so lovely grace of it all, loved the message at the end ;)