Impotence of the Week

Somebody else
Has your fate written down in a book.
Somebody else
Doesn’t want you taking a look
At the man behind the curtain
But I am quite certain
That that m**********r’s a crook.

Somebody else
Thinks that your name is your employee ID
Somebody else
Wants to know what’s inside of your pee
Well, that somebody else
Might be your new God
But they don’t mean s**t to me.

Reviews

[Blackbirdsong]

There are a lot of visual elements in this poem that all work well, though I wish you had written more, but I always wish that when I find something that I like.

[Mike P.]

I just had to drop by to say that the name of this piece is just f*****g killer. i meant to leave a message some time ago about that but i must've forgotten to do so in a drunken stupor.

[EccentricCat]

Mmm...sounds so intense. Its simple and captivating. I love it.

[Tai Chi Italy]

Whoa!lol Perfect title and divine poem in the circumstances of the magick. Well done for penning it, I would be a nightmare if I could!!lol Smiling at you, Tai