little squirrel

A Poem by Carla (trying to make every day count)

just a fun poem I wrote just for fun

Little squirrel
u
p

     tree
          branch
               across
                          jump

to
          other
                branch
down
tree

s
t
o
p
on
trunk

flick
flick

smell

flick, flick

smell

flick, flick

all clear

d
o
w
n

to
          ground

          bounce                bounce
bounce           bounce                bounce

across grass

© 2008 Carla (trying to make every day count)

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Reviews

Fabian G. Franklin

OMG! I absolutely LOVE this! They say there's no such thing as a perfect squirrel, well, they should read this!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Salvatore Buttaci

I like this one! It's got all the words I need to put myself for a moment inside the fur of the inquisitive squirrel and understand just a little about what the nut hunter faces in his day.

Sal

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Rock And Roll Cowbo..

That was quite fun, the format added greatly to the poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Laughing Lunatic

This is cute! =)

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 6, 2008

Author

Carla (trying to make every day count)

fulton, NY

About

I try to write what I feel and what I know....sometimes that doesn't always work though.... I get inspired by weird things and that causes me to write.... hope you enjoy my musings.... thanks.. .. more..