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sucide is painless

i wish there was magic
to make it all better
the magic would solve it all  
i know it just dont happen that way


one time i thought i had the magic way out
but i realized that my magic way
would have make a lot of family unhappy.
i now know that isnt magic at all.


i just made the situation worst
for even attempting it.
to stand and watch the water 
and the water had a way of luring
luring you into it looked so appealing 


i realized that way isnt the solution.
now i am to be more of an optimist
but some people make it so hard to be.
the greatest thing i had was the love
love of my family and friends.
 

Reviews

[Bhabie]

consider the magic
the solution is me

[STEVEN]

a fabulous writing and i love every word and the way it is put together...you are an amazing writer and i want to see so much more from you...keep up the good work...

[Kimberly]

I absolutly loved this.
You are very talented.
=]

[STEVEN]

this is something that we have talked about several times although i have never read this piece before now...i am glad that you are well past this and that you feel so much better because of the love of your family and friends...we are all here for you cece...and i will definitely be here for you always...this is something special to have written and posted on any website...you are so very courageous for having done this...i will always love and respect your writings as i will always love and respect you...come to me any time you have a problem...i am always here for you...

[blacksky45]

ok i know exactly how you feel cause i was in the same boat. only i got help from my friends and not i am more possitive and happy with my life. hope it works out for you. there are some small errors in this poem.
stuation-situation. would have make a lot of family unhappy-would make a lot of my family. good poem and keep writing!