A Poem by An owl on the moon

Just a little chocolate fun... :D



It’s all full of sugar sweetness, dark confectionery delights

Love to devour it in the morning, afternoon, and nights

Colored bronze, mahogany, hazel too, tis über candy galore

Flavored with almonds, peanuts, carmel, dried fruit, and more


It’ll make you wear loose fitting clothes and smile in the rain

It’ll make you feel tingles on your tongue and leave the sweetest stain

Like a sugarplum to your brain. Come on!




Outside, inside out I’m livin la vida cocoa

You’ll crunch and slurp and say I’m livin la vida cocoa

Its flavor’s so rich and fine, its color the deepest mocha

You’ll crunch and slurp and say I’m livin la vida cocoa

Livin la vida cocoa, Come on!

I’m livin la vida cocoa!


Ate some truffles in New York City there in Times Square

Gobbled a Snickers bar and felt so good, I do declare!

Devoured some strawberries dipped right next to the champagne

Once you’ve chomped a bite or two you’ll never be the same


[Sing it with me now!]


© 2010 An owl on the moon

Author's Note

An owl on the moon
I rarely eat chocolate (goes straight to my hips) but I do love singing about it! (I say all of this tongue placed firmly in cheek…) My condolences to Ricky Martin for messin’ with this! Original song, if you prefer music to chocolate:

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a very mouth watery write..nice detail and very lyrical and oozing with chocolate tempation and delight... a very fun read..nice job!!

Posted 14 Years Ago

I love chocolate! Eat it all the time! (goes straight to my belly but I try to lose it by working out, I guess) And I love this song!! Greatly done!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Lol! that was adorable. I loved it, and I like it a lot more than Ricky Martin's song. haha! Chocolate's always going to win in a fight against him though :)
thanks for that, it definitely made my day :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

This does have a dancy tune, and I do love Ricky Martin LOL!
You said it all in the last line...Once you've chomped a bite
or two you'll never be the same, and I should know because I am
a chocolate lover...hips or not LOL!!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Yummy fun! :)

(I now dash to find my dark chocolate stash, in the kitchen.....)

Posted 14 Years Ago

mmmm you have me smiling while my mouth is watering....that picture is to die for with all those delicious treats. If I were to indulge in those I could not stop, and would have to run everyday straight for 2 weeks! :) You picked a perfect song to accompany your chocolate masterpiece...:)

Posted 14 Years Ago

Oh dear God, you had my hips moving and everything. You always manage to amaze me, this time you've put your skills to a quirky, comical song, i'm sorry but I have to say, it was delicious.
Also, I preferred yours to the original, i'm quite a big chocolate fan. Brilliant!!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Oh my :) As a girl, I just found this uber fantastic!! It seems I've been eating a fair amount of chocolate lately and with Valentine's coming up I daresay I'll have way too much more. This was fun and comical and I pictured Ricky Martin dripping in fudge, lol! Makes me think of the M&M's, Reese's and chocolate chip cookies I've had.... A chocolate dream sir! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

Ok. If I have to run to the grocery store today to buy chocolate I'm going to blame it all on you! :-) What a fun little song! It's very clever and I can here it in my head. You did really good on this. I love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago

LoL How delightful!!
I do not eat much chocolate either, but I love it
on Valentines Day! Orange & Strawberry Cremes..mmmm
When I was pregnant, I craved Snicker bars!
Had one everyday! That was 23 years ago and have rarely
eaten one since, funny huh?!
This was great fun, thanks!!

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on January 31, 2010
Last Updated on February 5, 2010
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