I Wish Sometimes I Knew No Words

I Wish Sometimes I Knew No Words

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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Then I could never hurt you...

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I wish sometimes I knew no words

Then I could never hurt you…

Or why can’t I just be like

Christopher Robin to Pooh?

Saying things that give a lift

And are in this world so long overdue?

If you could only see inside my heart

That those words are this fool’s rue…

Perhaps you’d see the deeper words

All those never misconstrued…

I wish sometimes I knew no words…

Only showed each day howI love you…

 

© 2010 An owl on the moon


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Author's Note

An owl on the moon
I'm learning, but I still say stupid stuff and hurt people I care about... Wish I was more like Christopher Robin... "Promise me you'll always remember: You're braver than you believe, and stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think." - Christopher Robin to Pooh

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There is something mysterious about this piece of writing... its essence is soft, sad, and warm; oh, how we always seem to speak words that weren't meant to be spoken! I know that feeling, and I believe it is beautifully woven in this piece. Bravo, my friend.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This is really sweet..i love it. well done

Posted 14 Years Ago


how incredibly sweet this is, I can relate to this
I sometimes think I have too many...this was
so adorable and very loving..

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really liked this. Short and sweet. Beautiful. There seemed to be a much deeper meaning to those words than simply what they say. I love the quote in the note underneath too. And watching Pooh trying to remember it through the movie =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh I know how you feel here... why can't we always know the answers? Why is it sometimes hard to express what we feel? The complexities of human emotions... oh yeah I can relate to this piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Your quote above is a favorite of mine and one I occasionally use on my profile too. I really enjoyed this piece. Also reminds me of a favorite song of mine: "More Than Words" by Extreme. All our actions should reflect the love we feel inside, for those feelings defy words...Nicely written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


very precious xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ah! WOW... I found the one sweet in a way! Very deep too... Loved the font too.
The message was great.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really love the message. It makes me think of all the things i've said to everyone, and what they've said to me in return. We all hurt people and they hurt us too. I wish everyone could read this, and really recieve the message straight to they're heart!!

have a great weekend;)


Posted 14 Years Ago


This is such a wonderful write here. So open and such a wonderful message here. I liked this one alot Craig! This is very well expressed and well said!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Words... those things we attach to sounds that carry messages to others..
It's all in the intent and delivery of those words Craig..Words will not hurt for long if given with the love in the heart..
Another finely crafted piece from your caring pen..

Posted 14 Years Ago



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