"Now I take her into me
share my book with her
until we know
can read each glance
each whisper
each touch…"
Poetical Prowess!!! This was fantastic! From the subtle flow to the image at the beginning to set the mood of the piece....you crafted an intelligently phrased piece. The type so delicately thought of that i cannot help but be enthralled in the book (pun intended) :)
I've been gone for weeks and this amazingness is what greets me! I just adore the sensuality of this, I've read it like a dozen times and THIS is how passion is suppose to be written. Poetry is beautiful, but when you write it, it's jaw-dropping gorgeous.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
You always bring such light wherever you go. Thank you, dear friend! :)
This is absolutely brilliant...
The essence of sheer admiration simply jumps at you, it you do in such an effective way.
You also keep the core of the point you're making alive with each and every stanza.
Great work
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
So very glad you came by! Thank you for commenting on my poem. Hope your weekend is all kinds of won.. read moreSo very glad you came by! Thank you for commenting on my poem. Hope your weekend is all kinds of wonderful. :)
This is such a sweet telling of awareness and familiarity....what a simple sentiment to know someone so deeply, and be totally engrossed by them. Romantic sweep of pages here.
And I read with such abandon
across her pages
my fingers trailing
her soft paper skin…
Love it Craig...
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Frieda! So glad you were by! Thank you for being so kind... :)
11 Years Ago
My pleasure, I need to stop in more often, as soon as I catch up! You serving vino any time soon? .. read moreMy pleasure, I need to stop in more often, as soon as I catch up! You serving vino any time soon? ;-)
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
Yet t.. more..