"Now I take her into me
share my book with her
until we know
can read each glance
each whisper
each touch…"
Poetical Prowess!!! This was fantastic! From the subtle flow to the image at the beginning to set the mood of the piece....you crafted an intelligently phrased piece. The type so delicately thought of that i cannot help but be enthralled in the book (pun intended) :)
Flawless amigo and a dam fine book they are indeed my friend.
Loved the title honestly thats what caught me from the start .
Cheers to this write my talented friend keep posting and stay crazy Gonzo
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
GONZO! Thank you for sharing your amazing thoughts! Crazy here as usual. :)
I've been gone for weeks and this amazingness is what greets me! I just adore the sensuality of this, I've read it like a dozen times and THIS is how passion is suppose to be written. Poetry is beautiful, but when you write it, it's jaw-dropping gorgeous.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
You always bring such light wherever you go. Thank you, dear friend! :)
This is absolutely brilliant...
The essence of sheer admiration simply jumps at you, it you do in such an effective way.
You also keep the core of the point you're making alive with each and every stanza.
Great work
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
So very glad you came by! Thank you for commenting on my poem. Hope your weekend is all kinds of won.. read moreSo very glad you came by! Thank you for commenting on my poem. Hope your weekend is all kinds of wonderful. :)
"There are only four questions of value in life...
What is sacred?
Of what is the spirit made?
What is worth living for..
and what is worth dying for?
The answer to each is the same:
ONLY .. more..