You are my world

Love Poetry - You are my radiant and glowing the angel sent down from Heaven on the wings of a Dove. You're everything I am looking for and for you I plan to reserve all my Love.

 

You're so beautiful to me you're my sweet dreams of Heaven and Earth. I imagine you've been a treasure to many since the day of you're birth.

 

 You bring me overwhelming joy though we've just begun. When morning has broken darling you're my temperate sun.

 

You're the warm glow of iridescent candle light my twilight and my starry sky. You make my eye's leak crystal tears for the first time through blissful cry.

 

You've fulfilled my all dreams you blew me soft baby kisses, which sweetened my air and fulfilled my warmest wishes.

 

I remember the first gentle touch of you're hand our first loving embrace, our first kiss like a sweet caress as you slowly kissed my lips then softly my face.

 

With the just slightest touch of you're lips on mine you've brought me the most jovial sentiment. You're refreshing to me like a fresh picked strawberry or the sweetest candy peppermint.

 

You're the sanctity of my morning you're my night time serene. You're my nocturnal emission my love when I am in dream.

 

Before I lay my head to rest though, I pray to the lord for us and then my soul to keep. I then tell God of your angelic face so beautiful I imagine other angels weep.

 

You are my radiant and glowing the angel sent down from Heaven on the wings of a Dove. You're everything I am looking for and for you I plan to reserve all my Love.

Reviews

[J.Black]

"With the just slightest touch of you're lips on mine you've brought me the most jovial sentiment. You're refreshing to me like a fresh picked strawberry or the sweetest candy peppermint." --- mmm peppermint!

You are a glass of fresh, crystal clear water that coats my throat Craig. This was alot to take in, but I'm glad I can digest so easily! This was simply beautiful.

[Kaitlin W. Blaylock]

I love the depth of emotion here, but you struggle with contractions. Where the words "you are" would be appropriate, use "you're." When you use the possessive pronoun, use "your." This will make your poem easier to read, and all the more emotive.

[~angelalala~]

kudos on rhyming sentiment & peppermint :) a gorgeous love poem. i love the lines "You're the warm glow of iridescent candle light my twilight and my starry sky" & "I then tell God of your angelic face so beautiful I imagine other angels weep". GORGEOUS! this has some beautiful imagery in here. such a wonderful tribute to the power & beauty of love.

[Kelley]

now that was romantic and it told of your unrelinquished love for this person. I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sending it to me.

Kelley

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This is really beautiful. You are an amazing writer! This girl you are writing about is very lucky! :)

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Very romantic and erotic
Good work :)

[octane143]

Wow! What a lucky woman. To have someone not only feel those things for you but to be able to twist them into such beauty. It tears away alittle bit of the cynacism and gets me thinking...what if...?

[Everchanging Disaster]

I don't think I can read your work any more...
J/K
But really it is so full of emotion that it spills into the reader's heart.
Congratulations on a great piece!
-Loeva

[Rachel]

Aww...I don't know what to say to that... 'sgood, i guess is what I want to say. But you might think about formatting it to end the line with your rhyme so that time will tell what line you're trying to rhyme. Speaking of rhyme, yours are pretty good. Keep on keepin' on.
~Rachel