Yes I saw him today! But in a different way

So hello cupcakes this is my first poetry so it is very close to my heart as it is full of love and emotions. This poem depicts a day "The day of seeing love for the first time"

Yes I saw him today! But in a different way

I knew him from the years more than nine,

But never wished before him to be mine

With his divine hands he started playing flute,

My heart started humming while lips being mute

May be before I had lost that privilege,

To love him at my peaked craze

My ecstatic heart only wanted him to stay,

Yes I saw him today! But in a different way

Soon when he started singing with a smile on his face,

My heart skipped a beat forgetting about it's race

I was so lost in him that I forgot about the crowd,

My lips were still quiet while heart chanting his name loud

Then he stopped singing and it was time to leave,

My eyes were crying without tears full of grieve

But i felt delighted adoring his every moment of stay,

Yes I saw him today! But in a different way

                                                                         ~CHAHAT SINGH

Author's Note

Hey! so basically this is my first poetry and english is not my first language so hope you to avoid grammatical errors. I would like you to tell me what you loved about the poem most and where can i improve. Hope you enjoy!