Midnight

Midnight

A Poem by Steven Cash

Hold her while she is here
No matter how long
Cause the clock will soon strike midnight and she will be gone

Don't take her for granted
Look into her eyes
Be with her when she is happy
And hold her when she cries

Don't waste time looking
Searching for someone else
Love her for who she is
Make your words heartfelt

She's the one you need
It's simple, I will explain
Tell her you love her
Don't let her slip away

They said it and its true
Don't let fear blind your
sight
Sometimes the hardest thing
And the right thing are alike

So speak up and say it
Take her for your own
Hold her forever
And never let her go

Don't think your job is over
When you are one
Cause love is a process
Never stop til life is done

So tell her how you feel
You may not have long
Cause the clock will soon strike midnight
And she will be gone

© 2012 Steven Cash


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this is perfect. in the society we are in today - i feel that boys have lost respect for girls - treating them like toys without meaning . but this poem has brought back that meaning to love
i especially like the lines
Don't take her for granted
Look into her eyes
Be with her when she is happy
And hold her when she cries
beautifully written and you seem to kno what ur writing about - like u understand girls very well
- my favorite of the poems I've read so far
nice job steve


Posted 7 Years Ago


Steven Cash

7 Years Ago

thanks so much

yea, i guess i do understand girls

i mean, i've seen a lot
You're awesome ! lol

Posted 7 Years Ago


Steven Cash

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much
My god, this made me smile like a fool! That could've been a song and I guarantee I would have it on replay. :) Simply beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Steven Cash

7 Years Ago

Thanks
What a beautiful message--something everyone should read!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Steven Cash

7 Years Ago

Thanks Meg
wow! this is lovely.


Posted 7 Years Ago


Steven Cash

7 Years Ago

Thank you
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kittykatt

7 Years Ago

uw
gave me shivers in a beginning. cant be critical as dont know much about poetry, but can say it is a nice one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Steven Cash

7 Years Ago

Thanks
nicely written. definitely has a lyrical feel to it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Steven Cash

7 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed
This sounds extremely familiar but I love it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Steven Cash

7 Years Ago

Yea I got inspiration from Cinderella by Steven Curtis Chapman
Have you ever heard Cinderella by Steven Curtis Chapman? If you haven't you should take a listen. They are so close!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Steven Cash

7 Years Ago

Yes I know it

It was an inspiration for this kinda
Brielle Cartny

7 Years Ago

sweet!
Very sweet

Posted 7 Years Ago


Steven Cash

7 Years Ago

Thanks Ahmad!

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