RAINBOW OR RAIN

This short poem is my description of the two. let me know what you think of it?

RAINBOW 

BLUE=CALM

YELLOW=HAPPY

GREEN=UPLIFTING

ORANGE=WARM

RED=UPSET

 

RAIN

RAIN IS TRANSPARENT, IT SHOWS SADNESS, DEPRESSION. SOME PEOPLE HIDE THEIR FEELINGS BY GOING OUT SIDE IN THE RAIN, THIS WAY YOU REALLY CAN'T TELL IF THEY ARE CRYING. RAINDROPS MIXED WITH TEARS.

Author's Note

THIS IS JUST MY DEFINITION OF THE TWO. LET ME KNOW HOW YOU FEEL ABOUT IT?

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

What an interesting concept, raindrops mixed with tears, lovely!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Oh this really describes a friend of mine to a tee who is grieving right now...nicely done. Thanks for sharing!
Light,
Siddartha

[An Ordinary Woman]

raindrops mixed with tears... I never really thought about that before. Very insightful. I like your poem. It's nice, well written and interesting. Great job!!!

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is excellent

[Tim]

Well put Charlotte. Although I've never seen anyone do this, I can understand the rain's disguise in order to cover up one's emotions.

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem was very good. Colors do represent how we feel. Rain is sort of a peace for the sad people. I believe it make them feel the whole world is crying with them. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Orlando Murcia]

This was really thought out
the way you described it was
right on.

It's like we both think alike

Greaty work

Orlando M

[Kerry]

I have actually done this - gone outside in the rain so that people would not realize that I was crying. Nice juxtaposition of thoughts. Well done!

[qaralynn]

agree with that..though sometimes rain brings happiness
a good write

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

rain brings many emotions. Great Write!