Foolish Pride the fallen Angel

Foolish Pride the fallen Angel

A Story by charlotte talley
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a short acount on a angel demon name foolish pride

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FOOLISH PRIDE THE FALLEN ANGEL

Foolish pride is an unwise angel. But for some odd reason we let this demon enter our lives. With its controlling and demands. If by chance you see me and foolish pride is visable, please just walk on by.Foolish stops me from loving and being happy.

Foolish tells me all kinds of lies like,"all you need to succeed is me." Now you know the devil is a liar.Foolish has alot of followers that loves nothing but to bring us down. Foolish dosen't want me to be happy, unless I'm happy within it.Foolish can betray itself as a beautiful woman or a handsome man( doesn't matter).

It also can tell you that the thrill is gone out of your life, but don't listen. keep on fighting and praying to the Almighty God for help and guidence.

 

Foolish you will not live long.

 

 

© 2009 charlotte talley


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charlotte talley
hope u enjoy this little insight and take heed to it.

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Pushing aside my foolish pride in order to do the right things is very hard, but I'm much better at it now than when I was young. The act of doing so falls into the "being a man" category, I think. I don't know why people don't say "being a woman," but they should.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I've seen foolish pride standing beside a lot of people who never recognized him. I do and stay away. Good story and point.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pushing aside my foolish pride in order to do the right things is very hard, but I'm much better at it now than when I was young. The act of doing so falls into the "being a man" category, I think. I don't know why people don't say "being a woman," but they should.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I agree with the poem. Better to be smart and wise. Think first before action. A foolish person will think too late. A excellent story with some common sense.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


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So well said. Foolish Pride can corrupt lives in an instand. Well Written

Posted 11 Years Ago


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charlotte talley
charlotte talley

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My name is charlotte talley, I have been writting for three years now. I am taking writing classes from a on-line study school, called LONG RIDGE WRITING COURSE/ BREAKING INTO PRINT. I have started my.. more..

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