No air

A Poem by chaset

I cant breathe with no air,

i dont think that that this is fair,

you're with another girl and all i can do i stare,

My hearts pounding in my chest,

I believe this isn't a test,

i feel like a bird with no nest,

I wish i can go back and rewind,

but then again you're not that kind,

you made up your mind,

I'm not wasting anymore time,

I feel like im going to jail cause of a crime,

I wish i could hear that chime,

Wait i dont wanna start a fight,

I'm stopping with all my might,

I'm moving out of sight,

I hope shes not to uptight,

The choice isn't mine,

so i hope you make it worth your time.

© 2011 chaset

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Shelby

Good rhymes, but the rhythm was lost several times. It was a good idea and I liked the themes you put forth. You get the sorrow and pain across and this certainly has potential, but again, the rhythm was lost every now and then and I was a little lost in the muddled lines. You obviously have talent. keep writing, friend.