The Park

The park, where children play, where darkness attacks.

The Park

In the park

When it’s dark

The darkness creeps

From where they all sleep

Swirling

Whirling

A pot of trouble

 

In the park

When it’s not dark

The children are busy

Making me quite dizzy

Happy

Oh so sappy!

A pot of joy

Author's Note

A lot of people have told me not to give away my poem in the author's note, so I wont. But message me if you want to know what it means! It has two meanings, that I wrote anyways, I'm sure you'll find more.
Please review, would love to know how you read this!

Reviews

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Day and night are like day and night in most cities..Now even some parks are not safe in the daylight..Drug deals going down..People shooting..Never know what will happen..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by my work..Your presence sent me a ray of sunshine..Sunflower

[littlelilypurplebride]

I agree with kjanelle123. don't care what it means it's a nice poem. god bless lily

[Rose Masen]

Definitely message me what the meaning behind it means. It's AMAZING!

[Geralyn Miller]

Frankly, I don't care what it is supposed to mean, this poem makes me happy and I like it.

[Moflo]

I loved the formatting of this a lot, great rhymes! I think your imagery is very clear and to the point, almost has a Blake-like. I got reminded of the Blake poem, "The Echoing Green," when I read it...both versions of "The Echoing Green." Good job.

[Karli]

I like this:) I could totally picture the park, and how creepy it could be, and how joyous I feel when I play around all day:) good job!

[Kat24]

hi,
this is really good. sounds very interesting too. Kat24

[GrandDystopia]

This was one of your stranger pieces but incredibly cool, the fact that its open to interpretation is what makes it strong.
Great work as always chels:)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

there are so many ways of interpreting this one, but that was makes it so cool. i enjoy this one, it leaves with a feeling of uneasiness.