Fights

Fights happen for a reason

They don't have a season

some victims are sensitive they don't speak up

some can't handle the things spoken to them

and they just wanna throw a sandle

They say bad words , we too

no , now that doesn't end the fight

people punch eachothers face break some teeth

still it doesn't end

actually fights end

with a true sorry

it's okay if they don't listen

there are billon's of people in the world

atleast you'll find a better friend

Reviews

[Bear]

Critique: (and they just wanna throw a sandle) throw a sandal
(people punch eachothers face break some teeth) each others
(atleast you'll find a better friend) at least

Review: You are so right, fights happen for but have no reason, very wise words. I love the ending, it is a moral people can take to heart because it is so true, there are a lot of people out there you can look for a better friend among :~) Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot :)

[TalesOFaMadman]

I agree I still have a grudge with a person even though he stopped talking to me. I made him stop talking to him and I still hate the guy. I'm pretty sure he won't say sorry after what I did (punched him in the face). Also I'm too proud to say sorry either. He was an a*****e so he got what he deserved. I like your poem it brings back memories.

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot