Touch (freestyle)

lust is a must sometimes.

Your hands so inviting, the kisses you give is so soft.

our bodies as one. 

the heat we make, the puffs of breath we take. 

We touch

We kiss

We roam our hands everywhere, every inch of our body parts. 

The sweat we make, never tasted so good.

We said only whisper sweet things to each other. 

only to make it better. 

we want to go further, just lay me down on the floor.. 

and inch by inch the clothes are off.. 

inch by inch your kisses go down more...

so hot and inviting.. 

we only want more..

Author's Note

again any suggestions are welcomed.

Reviews

[Liz-z]

"Our bodies as one"
Ahh, a thrilling romantic line... :) LIKE SO FAR! :)

"We roam our hand everywhere,..." like this one too!

[Brad]

any suggestions? er....how bout giving us a chance to catch our breath? nicely done, erotic and primal

[DamienHino]

aww this is an awesome poem...nice imagery
"we want to go further, just lay me down on the floor..
and inch by inch the clothes are off..
inch by inch your kisses go down more..." fave line...