Tazer Love

A Poem by Marie Harrison

Love poem

TAZER LOVE

Your love jolts

have live bolts

of electric currents

seizing throughout my body.

I'm still shaking from my

first taste of your

painful kiss

on my tender lips.

My skin is burning

from where you first

touched me

just now.

I'll surely bare a revealing

scar for all to see

tomorrow.

Love like yours

makes my feet run with the fastest motions

as far away and as fast as I can,

I'm scared to death of you now.

Your love sizzles through my skin,

it's electrifying,

and jarring to my system.

It's too much for me to handle.

Nightmares!

I'll have now

after our only

moment together.

Your passion was a dagger

to my trembling heart

from the very start.

Your devotion was as potent yet deadly

as the sharpest razor dusted with purest cocaine.

Your love has left me

breathless,

motionless,

and in traction on the floor,

with only the slightest touch.

Keep your taser love away from me!

© 2010 Marie Harrison

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alesuriko

I love the rhythm and structure of this poem! It's really well done! The flow leads you through it so smoothly and the imagery engulfs you, it's amazing! I love the line "as the sharpest razor dusted with purest cocaine." Well done my dear. The emotion and the imagery in this was described really well that the readers can tap into it perfectly. What a great poem! The only thing I found to critique is that "through out" is one word. Also, the structure of the last stanza "breathless, / motionless" GREAT! And the image of "in traction on the floor" so good. Again, well done!