Cosmic Love

A love poem.

 

Cosmic Love

High up above

On my toe shoes

That fit like a glove,

I long to spin on Mercury’s

Moon drops of love,

 

Where I’d bat my

Eyelashes at the

Stars that

Twinkle above.

 

I’d twirl around

 In a celestial

Wonder, scattering

Glittery moon dust

Into outer space.

 

Leaping over

The Big Dipper,

I’d float around Orion

Without making

A sound.

 

I’d star gaze,

As thoughts of

Your movie star face

Would blaze through

My mind.

 

Pouring a glass of

Orbit’s Sparkling Wine

I’d make a toast

To Your Heavenly Reign

And my crystal goblet

High I’d raise.

 

For you’re my

Moonbeam King,

Let’s flee up above

In our nuclear rocket ship,

Where we’ll

Make cosmic love.

 

 

Reviews

[G. Anderson]

The color and font did not go over well with Gage's migraine... xD
Other than that, the rhyme was bold but subtle, giving the impression of natural rhythm. Most poets have trouble with rhyme schemes, and I've often found it to be distracting :/

Other than that, I loved the simplistic theme.

~Gage

[Robin]

very imaginative , and fun well done Marie

[Chilson, Joshua]

I really like the third stanza, great use of imagery :). As well, the whole thing fit's love perfectly as space is something hard to reach full of light and darkness which I find great to use in comparison.

[Steve]

Very nice....your imagination Marie is amazing.....I like this!

[.]

I love it! Lighthearted and full of cosmic metaphors! Brilliant :)