Wedding Bouquet

A poem about desire.

 

Wedding Bouquet

Floral bouquet dreams;

Women push and shove to catch,

Lucky foliage.

 

Author's Note

Who hasn't seen the fight for the wedding bouquet. It can be brutal. All for this wedding custom.

Reviews

[M Garcia]

At my cousni's wedding the bouquet bounced off my other cousin's head and landed at my feet. Everyone said to pick it up. I just looked at it, at my cousin who got hit in the head, we both turned and walked back to our table. Don't know what happened after that. LOL. Great senryu.

[Dream Weaver]

This is why no one in their right mind should ever marry :P

[Charles]

Gotta love superstitions.

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They don't know what they are letting themselves in for LOL.... yes the undignified scramble for a bunch of flowers and the myth that they will be the next to marry...sounds sane!

[Madame Mystique]

I once had a bouquet land next to my feet people were like " PICK IT UP" I looked at them gave them a thumbs up turned around and left...It got pretty ugly after that but... it was quite entertaining xD

I avoid the bouquet in every wedding I go to... And i do a pretty darn good job too :D

[TAO]

Wow... The senryu is on point, but what makes it even better is your choice of font. It works; makes me want to reach out and fight for the bouquet...weird, I know...but still, it is what it is.