Sky Diving High

A haiku poem about flying.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sky Diving High

I'll be dust too soon;

falling freely from the sky,

angel's wings have I.

 

 

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

In real life that does sound scary...though I want to go indoor skydiving....skydiving from a plane seems scary...but it probably is cool. I liked the imagery in it Anyways good job on this poem. Thanks for sharing.

[Black Cat Fever]

Sounds scary in real life. I like to keep my four paws flat on the surface of the earth.

[Mauricio Montoya]

only in my dreams.

[Michael of Gilead]

Always wanted to do this :)

[Pax Analog]

What I like most about this haiku is the ambiguity of "I'll be dust too soon" -- as in live life while you can, 'cause even normal span flies by -- or the possibility of being pulverized if the chute doesn't open. ;-)

[Tina Kline]

Excellent write, it has a wonderful feeling of just being free!

[Akeen V.]

i want to sky dive now.

[Short.Nerd]

Wonderful Job!

[Charles]

Lovely view.

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nicely done..