The Patriot

A poem about leadership.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Patriot

Short was his stature;

Crowds circled him to listen,

His aplomb drew them.

 

 

Reviews

[Akeen V.]

i think this is something different, almost confused me.

[Matthew Kult]

Great Job.

With love,

Jaidyn

[Cynthia]

Great Work!
That's really how other think of the statue.
Nice Written.

[KatiePie]

I suck at writing Haikus, and I'm not saying that to be modest, or to put myself down, I mean I really crap out at it, my haikus never follow standard and they make no sense nor will they ever I'm betting on. So reading this, by the end of it I was in astonishment, because it flowed so well, it make perfect sense, it was wrapped around a beautiful concept and all around its a wonderful piece that I really enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing. :)
-Cathrine

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I am reminded of the song Cult Of Personality when reading this... those with charisma can get people to lay down and die for them.

[Norma M Sutton]

Nice I like it.

[The Analog Kid]

Very good tribute to the man. Love "aplomb!"

[MoonlightIce]

Hmm I liked it! Very short,but with a great point at the end(:

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

The perfect Epitaph.

[Forever Mine]

short, sweet, and to the point. Very nicely done.