Phoenix In The Wind

A poem of new beginnings and new dreams.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Phoenix In The Wind

My dreams have died

Now I bow my head to sigh

 

Night is when I cry

Day is my rebuilding time

 

Too young to die

Too old to ask why

 

Now’s my time to fly

That’s why I have to try

 

I’m a phoenix in the wind

Flying towards the setting sun

To escape my sins

 

 

 

Author's Note

I don't know why but writing this poem gave me peace.

Reviews

[Jibey]

There is a therapy in writing out our feelings - and here you give yourself hope with the image of the phoenix - rising with bright warmth above the ashes of the past

[Cynthia]

It flows soooo well!!!!
This Poem DO give people peaceful feeling!
Beautiful Poem!

[Michael of Gilead]

Every day gives us the chance to rise.....well done Marie

[sarah]

i am glad it gave u peace :-)

[Short.Nerd]

Very beautiful!

Nice job! (:

[Wondering Mind]

It's because it's inspiring. Nicely rendered.

[Lauren Beth]

This really is beautiful...a tale of rebirth, not giving up, moving on & up...very inspiring poem. Love the last stanza, nice write!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You let it all out on this poem. It really is clearly a cleansing process.

[Buddhistboy73]

Well, I'm glad you did Marie.....this poem is a great way of inspiring those who also wish to change something in their lives, and as such can be seen in this context....I love it! "Flying towards the setting sun, to escape my sins"......great write! Good luck on your journey my friend....:)

[Norma M Sutton]

It is a beautiful poem.