Wedding Ring

A personal poem inpired by Team Renfield.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wedding Ring

Why did you take my wedding ring?  Did taking it give you a zing? Did hurting me give you a double ring in your b b thing? Did the carats make your heart sing?

 

Did you think your new lady would like my ring?  Wouldn’t it sting her to know whose thing that was first darling? 

 

That hurt more than anything.  Why did you take my ring?

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Sad write but a great one, why did he really take the ring? People do rationalize when they steal.

[YouoweYoupay]

Ooh...*stares at the sparkling ring*

[Wondering Mind]

what was the prompt thing? Sad and hurting.

[SamBug]

This was extremely sad but I loved it. :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

So sad! But if he is going to be mean, I say he can have my ring!!! who needs him?

[Closedown]

Awww so sad! Aww! Renfieldians unite!