My Heart's Magnificient Moon

My tribute poem to the moon.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“My Heart’s

Magnificent Moon”

O’ Moon so bright

Guide me with your

Beaming light

 

Make all the broken

Paths vivid to my sight

 

Dear Crescent Moon swoon me

With your aura’s might

 

Comfort me when

All hope is blight

 

When I’m belligerent

To my fellow man

Show me how to be polite

 

O Faithful Moon be

My handsome knight

Every lonesome

Night of my life

 

Be my loyal friend until

My final curtain descends

 

Author's Note

I was walking in the bright moonlight tonight and was inspired by my knightly muse.

Reviews

[Linear]

So beautiful the moon, cold, distant yet giving off that light to keep us safe, a lovely poem Marie

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Wow..!!! Lovely Moon..!!

[Cynthia]

Acutally, I so love this poem!
How I want myself to enjoy myself in the nature!
No matter what, now, I can enjoy that feeling in your poem!
Nice Work!

[Doug Ordunio]

it's OK, but it seems a little clumsy, like the rhythms need to be smoothed out a bit. Hope you understand what I mean...

[Jibey]

The moon was full tonight and its gentle light is always a comfort and an encouragement...

Here is a poem I wrote about the moon ...

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Jibey/596280/

[ebonpinion]

It's great to find comfort in nature. It's a good write. ^_^

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I am a child of the night and a believer in the moon so I must say I was captivated by your words... What a wonderful poem.