Angel's Winter Play

A winter solstice poem.

 

 

 

 

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-Angel’s Winter Play-

Frosty white

Blue sky days

 

Winter magic might

Take flight faraway

 

Downy snowflakes ice

As angels blistery skate and play

 

White turtledoves coo

On and on as twilight falls

From lost to saved

 

Angel souls soar like kites

On this eternal winter’s day

Reviews

[Dinesh Sairam]

Ah, great description. As always, I only wish of metrical accordance. Much enjoyed. It always feels good to related winter to joy (For the basic assumption is winter is woe), kind of works with the ironic effect. Thanks for sharing.

Keep writing.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the picture of the angel! This poem is so beautiful! loved it!

[Arsenic Nemesis]

I could really just picture a vast, snowy atmosphere with this poem; heck, I felt I was in it and everything. This is beautiful and really emotional; just pure magic, I loved it. I love the line "Angels souls soar like kites" its just wonderful, keep up the good work!~

[Cynthia]

Me too! I love the flow of this poem as well!
Great Peice of poem.
:D

[Jibey]

Lovely drifty thoughts... I feel you in the angel...floating this way, I hope!

[sarah]

I love the flow of this poem I love the emotion that seeps through the words and the picture blows my mind!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You have a special magic.
Somehow you always manage to make me
admire the season I dont really favor.lol

[Short.Nerd]

A wonderful piece. Great job! (:

[a]

Great piece, Keep on goin

[Art]

I like this...especially since tha Angelic world is a favorite of mine...nicely expressed throguh poetry...