Goddess On Pink Toes

A ballet poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Goddess On Pink Toes

How you twinkle on your toes

You spin, giving everyone a show

Soaring through the falling snow

Like a mighty eagle with pointed toes

Spinning round and round as the clouds close

You’re a goddess in the snow

Dancing on your pink toes

Where the wind will carry you,

Who knows?

He throws you wherever you go

You’re my goddess on pink toes

Author's Note

Love ballet

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautifull y done, felt like I was dancing!

[deeps]

I love this write, The rhyming is so amzing.
Love the flow.

[Poetic Beauty]

The flow of this poem is done well and the scene is beautiful

[KAREN]

The imagery is wonderful! The poem made me feel like dancing!

[Moflo]

I like the imagery here. You described the movement very well. I also like your rhymes.

[akapr17other]

I like it. Its so cute!

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Ballet is very wonderful indeed, I love this very well, really well presented and passionate. Great job, keep it up!~

[JanieB]

Cute poem.

[tynamite]

Nice ballet poem.

[Ashley]

I love this! i remember i took ballet when i was younger, i loved it i used to so good and able to stand on my toes. haha i should of kept up with it. anyways, very beautiful piece! it makes me want to see that ballet movie Black Swan even more. 100/100!!!!!!!!!!