HALF-HEARTED

"haiku"

Half -Hearted

Half of my heart lives

Other wants to be your tart

Oh, which half shall win?

 

Author's Note

Written watching the sun rise this morning.

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

If the heart is a tart then it must be eaten so it shall not live. What a dilemma! Love it!

[deeps]

Like the emotion in this write.

[Star Wolf]

Which half will win? Perhaps the half that will have the most fun! Me thinks that's the half that lives. Every enjoyable poem.